I'm thinking of offering free first paragraph reviews/critiques here in my blog.
How it works: send me the first paragraph of your book. It can be published, self published, or a WIP. I'll do an overall, and a line by line critique of the whole paragraph!
There's no competition, no fee, no silliness - if you want to participate, just send the paragraph (and let me know whether you want to be listed under your name, a pen name, or anon)
I'll post the critiques in the order that I receive them. Let me know if you want to play!